Five more minutes. please?

It'll be night soon, the children in the park will notice the shades of grey turn to black. A sadness will burden their hearts, they'll know its time to go home.

They don't want the time to run so fast, ironically it will.
Worried mothers will shout from far, "Chalo ghar chalo dair ho gai hai."

Heavy hearted children will ask for just five more minutes.
"Please, Ami paanch minit aur."

But eventually they will leave that park, not knowing if tomorrow will bring them back here.

She'll watch the time fly by faster than usual, because, his time is what she needs. She doesn't want the time to pass by, but ironically it will.
She'll beg her God, to give her five more minutes with him, they'll too pass in two.


Fatefully , he'll be gone. Not knowing if she'll ever see him again.


"Allah forever more minutes please?"

Comments

So ur back aftr almost a month.... Where were u.. and the tempelate is cool...
Eminu said…
not back, i dont intend to either. just something i felt after such a long time.
Ubaid said…
five more minutes won't make any difference!!
Eminu said…
Your wrong Ubaid. Five minutes have changed my heavy heart to a smile, a smile i haven't smiled in months.
Anonymous said…
The analogy used is perfect.

My brother does the five minute remedy for me.
Anonymous said…
Words are very unnecessary, they can only do harm.
Five minutes, is a long long time, it can be more useful for most of us than a whole life time combined. I once, only had a second or even less to take a life changing decision, but, being me i bottled up under pressure, it still torments me to this day. I can clearly remember my friends in agony.
But i only had a second...
it doesn't matter..

Life is so cruel but nvm life's banter will continue to mock us one way or the other, i am glad you are back even for five minutes ^_^
Eminu said…
Words are swords.
Words break you asunder.
Anonymous who are you?
Anonymous, who are you?
I want to know. I don't want you to be a hidden entity. Who ARE you?
Anonymous said…
Michelle. ^^;

Lovely post.

Just went through my comments and found you in it. Thought I'd stalk you from now on.
Eminu said…
Welcome aboard, Mehreen. = )

Also have to tell you, that I don't blog so much. Rarely, but you can always count on me to reply to a comment.
Anonymous said…
Five minutes, we're greedy for time which is ever controlling our existances.
.PaNdOrA said…
i just like it ^__^...nicely written "chun chun" haha
Eminu said…
why is it so funny =D?
Thanks.
.PaNdOrA said…
your name is funny =D......mera naam chun chun baba chun chun chun....raat chaandni mein aur tu hello mr how do you do? haha..i remembered that song..
Eminu said…
heh. Yeah, now that i look back, i have no idea why its mera naam chun chun :P

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