Draft coming to Real.

I wrote this ages ago, never got the time to publish it. Here it is now.


You wailed and he pretended not to hear the sorrow in your voice. You wondered, sleepless, if he was inadvertently oblivious or perhaps he didn't want to stick to a salty conversation. As usual, things that would mean weightily, were left at the edge of the dark sea shore, to be washed away into the endless sea tides.
He missed the right words, again.

You don't exist in his mind, do you?

Comments

Ubaid said…
this was is definitly worth publishing it superb work ....

it has a really nice raw feelings in it !!
Tuesday, December 30, 2008 9:26:00 AM
Eminu said…
you really think so? when i wrote this, i promised myself never to be hurt again :)
Tuesday, December 30, 2008 6:26:00 PM
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Tuesday, December 30, 2008 7:21:00 PM
Eminu said…
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Tuesday, December 30, 2008 7:50:00 PM
Ubaid said…
yaar i daily promise my self to be strong ... and not to get hurt anymore ... per phir bhi ... getting hurt has become one of my daily routine now !!
Wednesday, December 31, 2008 6:12:00 AM
Anonymous said…
One can never be completely immune..but slowly and gradually, barriers can be built. :)
Wednesday, December 31, 2008 5:07:00 PM
Eminu said…
Porous barriers?
Having the ability for some things to penetrate?
Gradually, walls are built. and Porous turns to Non porous
Thursday, January 01, 2009 12:29:00 AM
Opinionated Jaahil said…
I can so relate to this.
But honestly, this Walking Away person is right=)Honestly, barriers can be built. You can block things out, just depends on your will.
Sunday, February 01, 2009 11:16:00 AM
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